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Tuesday, September 6, 2016

What An Amazing Ski Trip.

                  What An Amazing Ski Trip.

Today we had a try of using screencastify we were talking about our ski trip. I didn't go skiing so it is just a made up story. So here is my story. 
I think I have improved in my writing because I am starting to  get more interesting words into my writing. 

3 comments:

  1. Salut it's me Alyscia.
    I like how you made up a story about these kids who does not know how to ski.
    This was a made up stroy or was it not i don't know?
    Au revour

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  2. malo e lelei it's Summer I really like how your voice is clear and easy to hear you but we can not see you properly because the screen is tilted up. I really like your story even though you where not there its a good story.

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