English

English

In English, with Miss Allen and Mrs. Mclaren we have been learning how to write a proper creative writing sentence.

The sentence styles are Power Sentence, Very Short Sentence, Simple Sentence, Red 

White and Blue Sentence.

This is what I have written

There once was an old man that lived in this old house on the lake he had amazing views to look at from the lounge. The view was cool he got to look at the Hills, Colour of the lake, and the stones in the lake. He woke up one morning and looked at the mountains and it was foggy. When he goes out for a climb on the mountains or a swim in the lake he would always leave his front door left wide open because he had no neighbors but his family would come and visit him once a week. It was a nice day to go for a swim. He loves swimming. When he went swimming he would collect some crystals and some cocalls. Cockles are a type of food to eat. He would go swimming for about 5 hours and whenever he found something he would go inside and put it on display in his house to show his family what he collected every time his family would come over and see him he would always go swimming and they would also go swimming or go and climb the mountain. Some times the mountain would be fogie or it would be cold but they would always wrap up warm but you would never know this but because he is an old man he would never get cold but he would always get hot and the others would look at him weirdly. The others in the family were always cold when they went climbing but when they went swimming it was always warm and hot the lake would never get cold. One night it was about 7 at night and the family stayed over for the night and the family had to light the fire because it was cold but he was not even cold.


Also, we have been doing stuff called submissions.
So here are my Submissions I have been doing in English

Submission 1

Oh what is Joy

To have a friend like you

Forgiving me strength

The way you do 

For lifting me up

When I’m feeling down 

And putting a smile on my face 

When I’m wearing a frown

Thanks for being there 

And helping me grow

Your friendship means a lot 

This I’d like you to know 

Submission 2

How much wood would a

Woodchuck Chuck

If a woodchuck could

Chuck wood?

He would chuck, he 

Would, as much as he 

Could,

And chuck as much wood 

As a woodchuck would 

If a woodchuck could 

Chuck wood,

Submission 3

Sometimes being silent is better than telling 

Other how you feel. Knowing that you are

being heard but not understood could be 

More painful then expressing your feelings