Title Should there be age restriction on video games
Introduction I think we should not have video games because what happens if little kids start to play video then if they won't stop playing them.
Reason 1. I feel that we don't need to have violence around little kids because when they are older they might do it when they are older.
Reason 2. It is not certain to have video games around little kids because you don’t want them to do some violence when they are older
Reason 3. In this situation not to have video games because when kids are at school they could do violence from the people that play video games.
I like that you chose to share some of what you have been doing in Writing Tamara. Have a look at reasons one and two. Are they different reasons or the same?
ReplyDeleteA great discussion Tamara, very hard as some students know the difference but others don't and try these things in real life. I definitely think there should be an age restriction so that they understand that what they are playing isn't real before doing it.
ReplyDeleteTamara u r doing really well with ur writing.
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